In the design principles session we presented a layout we had done. I chose my indesign layout of the komodo dragon as I wanted to gain feedback on it.
I recieved three pieces of feedback
1. Good use of negative space, like how the image bleeds onto the opposite page 'komodo snorkling adventure' subheading, maybe have it above the body copy for text hierarchy.
2. Good use of negative space.
3. Love the heading font eye-catching amongst the photos. Think the photo overlapping the page works well because it makes both the pages look related to each other.
The first and third pieces are constructive pieces of criticism, which I find will be helpful.